My Treasure revisions

My treasure is my iPod. It is a very famous portable music player. It helps me to reduce stress and makes me happy. My father bought it for me. At first, he bought an iPod for my sister. I envied her very much so I talked my father into buying me an iPod. I appreciated that very much.

I use it in the train when I go to school and return home. I am not bored in the train because I have an ipod. I also listen to music in my car. The iPod can record a lot of music. I was surprised at the capacity. It has not only musical functions of music but also many functions. For example, it has a clock, stopwatch, games and a calendar. I think ipod is very great so I want to recommend. The price is a little expensive but I think it will satisfy you. Ipod will become your treasure.

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sakito

I introduse to you my same class Sakito. He comes from Mifune. I don't know where it is.He come to school by train. He has a short black hair. The hair suits him of all boys. He is smart. He wears black T-shirt and black watch. I guess he likes black. He will become good father. He likes soccer. The position is keeper. Let's talk to him. 

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About Kumamoto 2

This photo is town in Kumamoto. It is very busy town. Many people come to this street because there are many shops. For example, Food shop, clothing shop and so on. The street is enjoyed from young people to old people.I rarely go to there. I don't know this street very well but I think it is a good place. I want to know about this street.If you know good place, please tell me.

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About Kumamoto

This picture is Kumamoto Castle. Kumamoto Castle recently celebrated its 400th anniversary. Many people come to there because it is very famous. The Castle was build by Katou Kiyomasa.The Castle has many history. I think Castle is beautiful and elegant. I want to live looks like it in the future. I have been to their when I was children. I don't remember it.I want to go to Kumamoto Castle someday.

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Foreign country

I have ever been to Australia, China and Hong Kong. I have stayed with host family in Australia twice. It was very nice time. I was taken to some place. The sea wave was very high. I went to China to meet my brother who was studying abroad. I went to Beijing. I also went to The Great of China and busy streets. I went to Hong Kong with my brothers. We are getting along with each other. I want to go to trip in foreign country.
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My Tresure

My treasure is ipod. It is very famous portable music player. It helps for me to reduce stress and make me happy.
I was bought by my father. At first, He bought ipod for my sister. I envied it very much so I talked my father into buying me an ipod. I appreciate him.
I appreciate him. I use it in the train when I go to school and return road. I was not bored in the train because I have an ipod. I often listen to music to use it in my car. It can record a lot of music. The capacity is surprised at me. It has not only function of music but also many functions. For example, It has clock, stopwatch, games and calendar.
I think ipod is very great so I want to recommend. The price is little expensive but I think it is satisfaction for you. Ipod will become your treasure.
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Letter to my hostfamily revisions

My name is Motohisa. I’m 19 years old. I live in Fukuoka. I am cheerful and active. I like sports, especially soccer. I belong to a soccer club in junior high school. My hobby is listening to music, I especially like reggae. I also like animals because I have a dog as a pet. My pet’s name is Kazu. He is a Japanese dog.
My favorite kind of food is Japanese food. I have no likes and dislikes about food. I want to go eating hamburger to McDonald’s because, I want to compare American hamburgers with Japanese ones.
My family has eight people, my father, mother, two brothers, a sister, Grandfather, Grandmother and me. I’m the youngest of the four children. My Father is an engineer. My mother is a pharmacist. My oldest brother is a businessman. My second brother is a college student. He studies economics. My sister is a college student, too. She studies economics. We are all good friends. We camp every summer and go to a hot spring every winter.
I learn English in college but English well. So I go to America to learn speaking with many people. I think this is a good chance for me. I have been to Australia and China but I have never gone to America. I want to compare American life to Japanese life. I have some images of America. For example, there are many big cities and country side. Chiefly, America has freedom. I’m especially attracted to old American cars because they are bigger than Japanese cars. I want to ride them. I hope this chance is good memory for me. I’m looking forward to going to America.
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Last Sunday

I went to Fukuoka by train. I went there shopping. I often go to Daimyou to buy clothes. I used to lose the way there. I met high school's friend. He study to become sound engineer in FMS. His hair is hard perm. We went to eat humberger.　We talked high school's life. It was very nice time. We went his house. He lives in his school's dormitory. I　relaxed such my own house. We ate dinner, went to hot spring. His friend works there. We relaxed very much. I like hot spring . I want to make hot spring my future's home. I came buck my home next day.I hope I met him again.
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Typing : My other clasees

I take some class except English class. I take PE at Wednesday. I play table tennis. It is very interesting for me. I take it class with my friend, Soya. We are good rival .In fact, I can play it better than him but I lose freshman. We call him "Taisyou." I will practice it to win him. Table tennis is not looks like hard but It is very hard. By the way, I heard that My father took part in Table tennis club in junior high school student.
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Letter to my host family

My name is Motohisa. I’m 19 years old. I live in Fukuoka. My character is cheerful and active. I like sports, especially soccer. I took part in a soccer club in junior high school. My hobby is listening to music, I especially like reggae. I also like animals because I have a dog as a pet. My pet’s name is Kazu. He is a Japanese dog.
My favorite food is Japanese food. I have no likes and dislikes about food. I want to go eating hamburger to McDonald’s because, I want to compare American hamburger with Japanese ones.
My family has eight people, my father, mother, two brothers, a sister, Grand father, Grand mother and me. I’m the youngest of the four children. Father is an engineer. Mother is a pharmacist. The oldest brother is a businessman. The second brother is a college student. He studies economics. My sister is a college student, too. She studies economics. We are all good friends. We camp every summer and go to a hot spring every winter.
I learn English in college but English well. So I go to America to learn speaking with many people. I think this is a good chance for me. I have gone to Australia and China but I have never gone to America. I want to compare American life to Japanese life. I have some image of America. For example, there is many big cities and country side. Chiefly, America has freedom. I’m especially attracted to old American cars because there are bigger than Japanese cars. I want to ride them. I hope this chance is good memory for me. I’m looking forward to going to America.
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How I study English

I want to speak English .very well and to read English. I want to become to understand English song's lyric. I practice writing blog in English and to read English books. I have to go to library to borrow English books. English books is too difficult for me、but EIEN has some level's book. It is good for me. I think I have to read English books and writing blogs.
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Golden Week plans

I'm going to go camping in Oita with my family. I have eight people in my family. So I have to go there with two cars. I'm looking forward to having dinner there. Because dinner is BBQ!! In addition, my friend will come back Fukuoka. He goes to Asia University in Tokyo. When he comes back, we always go driving. Because he loves driving. I hope I will enjoy this Golden Week.
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Food/eating habits

My favorite food is Japanese food. I like Saba no Shioyaki. It is very delicious. When I eat it, I eat rice a lot. I also like Yakiniku. I want to eat it every day, but it is very expensive. My grandfather sometimes takes me to Yakiniku restaurant. I like any kinds of food except relery and parsley. I usually have three meals. However I sometime don't have breakfast. I have no time in the morning.
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Music I like

I like music very much. I like reggae the best. I think reggae has strong meaning in the lyric. I also like its rhythm. I listen to any kinds of music. I often listen to music with iPod. I always listen to music in the train while I go to university or come back home. Listen to music makes me happy and fun. Do you think so?
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My hobbies

My hobby is playing sports. I like any kinds of sports. I like soccer the best. I belonged to the soccer club when I was in junior high school. But I didn't practice. I regret it. I often play soccer with my friends. It is very good time for me. Since it is getting warm, I want to play sports a lot.
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First Classes

First class is very hard for me because I did not study in spring vacation. I was very sleepy. I have to get accustomed to school life. I must study English very hard. For example, read English book, write blog. I have to take classes very hard. I want to level up my English ability. I will do my best.
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Spring Vacation

I went to Fukuoka with my friend. He drove his car. It was very dangerous because he were driving too fast. He must be crazy. we ate dinner Chinese noodle.It was very delicious. We strolled in Daimyo. We went to Fukuoka tower after that. It is very tall. I stayed there for only three minutes. I did not climb it.I want to go there again. I had a very good time in Fukuoka.
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My Treasure outline

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Seasons and Celebrations

In Britain, Canada and the USA, in each of the four seasons, people enjoy
different festivals and celebrations.

Do you like festival? There are many festivals in each country. The New Year, Valentine's Day, Christmas etc・・・. Times change,and festivals change too. All festival and celebrations has each meaning and history.Do you want to know it? Let's read this book.

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Seasons and Celebrations

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MICHAEL JORDAN

Basketball is Michael's life.

Do you know him? I think everyone knows him. He is a great basketball player. He is　called Air jordan. He was taught basketball by his brother. Nike makes a shoe for Michael. It is Air Jordan. A lot of people bought it. It is very famous now. I want it.

Michael likes baseball too. He starts a new job in baseball in 1994. I was surprised at the news when I have heard it at first. He makes many legends. If you wants it, let's read this book.

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MICHAEL JORDAN

TAYLOR

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Akaho-.

I introduce to you Akahoshi Yusuke. He is 19 years old. He is called Akaho-. What is mean? He knows only. He comes to school by bicycle. He like bicycle very much. He told me that I feel I can ride a bicycle somewhere. It is very nice. I can not it. He wear pink polo shirt and blue jeans today.
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